Ah, rewriting. So fun! So engaging! So intense! I’m serious, I actually really like it. But it can also be mind-boggling. Where to begin? How to approach it? What to do?
One concept that may be useful to you is that of draft passes. I’ve done this myself and recommended it to others, but I’ve never had a tricky name for it until now. And for that, I thank Rachael Herron, who mentions it in her new (and highly recommended) book, Fast Draft Your Memoir: Write Your Life.
A draft pass is when you go through your manuscript looking for one specific thing and that thing only. For instance, you might want to track the throughline of a subplot. Or check that the description of a character is consistent throughout. Or look at and vary how you note character movements. (I tend to have all my characters shrug, nod, and blow out long streams of breath, for instance.)
Isolating this one thing makes it easier to track it in the morass of pages that constitute a novel. Draft passes work best after the bulk of your rewriting is done and you’re finished with the big story questions. For instance, I just got notes from my agent on the rewrite of my romance novel. One thing I need to do a draft pass on is my two main characters thinking how attractive they each find the other. There’s way too much of it, and readers need to see it rather than have it told to them. Another draft pass will be devoted to heightening the main character’s motivation for not allowing herself to be swept off her feet by the hero.
I liken the process of draft passes to gently pulling pages of the manuscript apart and dropping a few pithy new words on sentences or even a scene in. You can use the search feature to help you find what you need, or, hopefully somewhere you have a list of scenes that will guide you. (If you don’t, I recommend you create one immediately!) And I’m sure those of you who use Scrivener have all kinds of cool ways to track things that I’m not aware of.
Oh, and just in case you were wondering, Janice Hardy had an excellent article on the difference between revision, rewriting, and redrafting on her blog this week. Check it out.
Have you ever done draft passes? Leave a comment or come over to the Facebook page and discuss.
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