Slightly Odd Critiquing Terms

A client mis-interpreted a suggestion I made for her this week, and it got me thinking about some of the critiquing terms I use, which at times are slightly odd.  And since this is a blog about writing but most of the time I write about mindset, motivation, and inspiration, I thought it might be nice to actually do a post about something writing-ish. Pencil-coloured-note-9236-l

So here's a list of common phrases and words I use when critiquing:

1.  Fleshing out.  As in, put more flesh on it.  Add some heft.  Expand the scene or description or dialogue.  Make it come alive so I can see it.  Interestingly, we generally think that revising is a process of paring away.  I find most often it is a process of adding on. 

2.  Mount on the page.  God, I hope the spiders don't assume this is a porn page.  Anyway, when I talk about mounting on the page it means you have not given me the full picture yet.   The scene is no doubt alive and well in your head, but you haven't gotten all the elements to the page yet.  Similar to #1.

3.  Root in scene.  Have you ever read a manuscript where there's lots of action and dialogue but you have no idea where the characters actually are?  This is another common problem.  The fix is to go back to the location through a line of description or action every so often.  Such as, "She set the glass down on the table."  Just one line here and there can help to root the reader in the scene.

4.  G.D.  No, its not a swear word, its an abbreviation for Go Deeper.  You need to get in to the paragraph and pull it apart.  Really get to the meaning of it.  Enter the spaces between the sentences and find out what's going on.

5.  Make scene.  This is just what it sounds like.  You've probably had a long thread of narrative going and now you need you some scene.  Put the characters in action in real time, like something you'd see on a movie screen.  And now you have yourself a scene.  It is the difference between showing and telling.  Readers like showing much better.

So those are my top five critiquing phrases.  What words and phrases do you use?  Which ones have you come across?

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  1. Just reading these is helpful, Charlotte. I particularly like number five. I have started a book by Gin Phillips. She is young but comes with a lot of praise. I’ll keep your list in mind as I read. Maybe next I’ll tackle some seasoned author and look at how these aspects apply as I read. Thanks.

  2. I’ll admit to my ignorance on these. The only one I knew was fleshing out. Now if someone wants to tell me to do all the rest, I’ll love it. ; )

  3. Very interesting. I will share these with my critique group. I think we just have different ways to say them but I kind of like having a new way to say them. Your topics are so great for us.

  4. Well, I’m glad to see that everyone is commenting because I have been locked out of responding to your comments! Crazy. Here’s hoping that this time it works.

    Jeanne, so pleased you’ll be sharing these with your critique group, and glad you are enjoying the topics. Thanks for reading!

  5. Okay, yay, the last comment worked. Now I can catch up with the rest of you:

    Trish, glad you had heard of it. My client was very confused by the term and actually thought it meant the opposite from what I did!

    J.D, yeah, a lack of scene is one of the biggest problems I see. I’ve not heard of Gin Phillips, but I’ll check her out.

    Zan Marie, consider yourself told. 🙂 Kidding, because I know you already do a lot of this in your work (judging by reading your blog) but sometimes I do think we need that little extra push to go a bit further.

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