When to Write in Scene
Reading a manuscript yesterday, I was reminded that, while most writing teachers (myself included) insist advocate that students write in scene, there are also instances when you should not write in scene.
Sometimes writers dramatize events that don't warrant a full scene. And then the writing just seems flabby. Not much is happening, but there's a full-blown scene written. I believe this is a subtle reason that many manuscripts fail.
But how are you supposed to know when to write a scene, then, for God's sake?
I have a couple of answers that should be helpful.
The first is a tidbit from an author and writing teacher whose name I've forgotten. Here it is:
Fast is slow and slow is fast.
What does this mean? It means that if you would experience the event slowly in real time, write about it fast (i.e., in narrative, which can be used to compress time). So, for instance, if your character spends a lazy Sunday morning reading the New York Times, dispatch that in a sentence or so. It it not an event that warrants a scene. On the other hand, maybe that character steps outside and notices her husband trapped under a car when the jack collapsed. In a split second, she races to the vehicle and lifts it from him in a rush of adrenaline. This is an event that you want to slow down and linger over, writing every sensory detail in a full blown scene.
The other helpful tidbit is actually several tidbits, or, a list of guidelines as to when to use scenes. This has been bouncing around in my mind for years, after reading it somewhere and putting it into use, but I also saw it recently in a discusssion of Sandra Scofield's book on writing scenes, called The Scene Book: A Primer for the Fiction Writer.
Here are three reasons a scene should exist:
1. To advance the plot
2. To reveal character
3. To set up something that will re-occur later
Of the three, I think the first two are the strongest, though certainly the last has its merits as well. What do you think? How do you choose which events to put in scene and which to write in narrative? Any tips for how to write in scene?